Finally got around to reading this. No major problems that I can see.
After scanning through it I did have the feeling that the layout could
be altered a little. There is an awful lot of white-space in the margins
and the order of sections could be altered. As a suggestion:
Contents
Intro to Wushu
Open Reloaded
Play Examples
Optional Rules
Campaign One-Sheets
Wushu Resources (websites and commercial Wushu stuff)
Intro to Wushu Open with a brief description of the license and what in
allows you to do.
Wushu Open
License
It might also be an idea to re-word some of the stuff so it maintains a
consistent tone or voice and avoids looking like a straight copy-paste
from websites and forums.
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http://blaster219.blogspot.com/
"Heroes get pushed off buildings, exposed to vacuum, electrocuted, infected,
burned, drowned, poisoned, irradiated, shot and stabbed. Being a hero is a tough
job."
Alternity GMG - Page 57, Gamemasters In Action
"You read it, you can't un-read it!"
John DiMaggio - Futurama Season 3 DVD Commentary
"If Yoda so powerful in the force is he, then why construct sentences in the
right order can he not?"