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Re: [wushurpg] Happy Holidays - Tales of Wushu

Finally got around to reading this. No major problems that I can see.

After scanning through it I did have the feeling that the layout could
be altered a little. There is an awful lot of white-space in the margins
and the order of sections could be altered. As a suggestion:

Contents
Intro to Wushu
Open Reloaded
Play Examples
Optional Rules
Campaign One-Sheets
Wushu Resources (websites and commercial Wushu stuff)
Intro to Wushu Open with a brief description of the license and what in
allows you to do.
Wushu Open
License


It might also be an idea to re-word some of the stuff so it maintains a
consistent tone or voice and avoids looking like a straight copy-paste
from websites and forums.

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Thu Jan 18, 2007 8:46 pm

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Happy Holidays All! I've uploaded the draft version of the Tales of Wushu project (formerly Wushu Collected). Enjoy! I am requesting feedback, as well as...
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Finally got around to reading this. No major problems that I can see. After scanning through it I did have the feeling that the layout could be altered a...
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